What Women Carry

[Richard Pierce]

I shall tryo to write an answer poem today, out of this back ache that's stalled me and my thoughts.

[Richard Pierce]

I tried to copy my answer poem into here, but it lost its formatting, so here's the link - https://open.substack.com/pub/tettig/p/chomolungma?r=cywqq&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

[Martin Foroz]

I liked the line: “A metronome to mark the passing of another hour.”🌹

[Ren Powell]

Thank you! I thought it might be tedious enough for anyone who ever tried to learn piano.

[Barb Natividad]

I like the rhyme in the fifth stanza. Very nice.

[Mike Speriosu]

Beautiful, Ren!

[Writer Pilgrim by So Elite]

Love these lines, deep, powerful. Thank you for sharing Ren!

[Ren Powell]

thank you!

[Joe Ivory Mattingly]

Gorgeous deep expressions

[Ren Powell]

Thank you.

[Ange Disbury]

A stunning poem and so beautifully read. Thank you for sharing 🙏

[Ren Powell]

Thank you, Ange.